Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Heroes

Heroes have special qualities that people admire. Heroes give us examples of the courage and strength it takes to face difficult situations and challenges in life.

Think of someone who is your personal hero. In a well-developed composition, describe this person and explain two qualities you most admire about him or her.

45 comments:

Treyvon Rogers said...

My hero is my dad because he always tells me what is right and wrong when I do something wrong. The first quality of my dad is that when I make a mistake he tells me one time he messed up and what happened in the future. The second quality is when I learn from my mistakes he always awards me with something.

daquari young said...

Someone that I admire is my ELA teacher ms.coleman the reason why I like ms.coleman is because she knows that I can do better and she is nice well to me she is. She is a cool teacher. You do not get teachers like her all the time she is one in a million

I also admire my aunt Karea because she told me that she will get me a sidekick and my mom told me that when people say they will give me something do not keep on asking for it and I have been worrying my self about the sidekick and I saw her last night and did not ask her then she called me and said you can me for anything because I am your aunt if you want anything you can ask me for it and she will get that’s why I admire her

Hakim Iman Harris Jr. said...

Some of us have lots of hero's. They are sometimes your family, an officer, a soldier or a person involved in politics. My hero's are my dad, mom, aunt, grandmothers, grandfather, my uncles and my siblings. Hero's help us, but sometimes we need to help them help us. For example, my aunt's son was killed 7 years ago and the killer is still on the loose, my grandfather's sisters have breast cancer and his parents died, my grandmother from my mom's side lost her mom 4 years ago and she fears for her dad, my other grandmother from my dad's side lost her sister when she was killed in a gang shooting, my dad went through allot of stuff when he was kid and my mom has to deal with all 5 of us. We need to help them overcome these obstacles or they will never get over it. Hero's aren't people with capes and masks or suites with tights, they are people we look up to, my mom guides me, my dad gives me advice, my aunt gives me advice everyone gives me advice so in 8 years I'm a responsible man and I have good job and a kind family.

Anonymous said...

Shanara Mosley

The person who I personally admire is my mom because she gave birth to me and without her I wouldn’t be here today and I live with my mom so she feeds me and she puts clothes on my back and i know she loves me very much. I also admire my mom because when I’m sick she makes sure that I am ok and she also take me to the doctors and buys medicine to make me feel better.I also admire my aunt Allen who is now dead because when i was a baby i stopped breathing and she prayed for me and hoped that i would live.Another person i admire is my grandmother because she's a holy person and loves her grandchildren very much and she always thinks of me and my cousin to go somewhere with her and that tells me that she has a lot of trust in me.

Nadalia Rowe said...

In my life right, my hero is my great-grandma, May. My mom taught me a lot of things but May was there first. May taught me things that I did not know and taught me right from wrong. When I was disrespectful to anyone in my family, we would have a talk and she would make me pay the consequences. It was worth it, though. She gave me confidence when I wanted to quit and she makes me who I am today, a strong and confident person. She passed away 2005 and for that I want to give you recognition. That is my hero, May Foster.
-Nadalia Rowe

Shaquan Murray said...

My hero is my dad because he taught me how to play basketball and play instruments and so on. My mom is another but my dad is cool he helps me on girls and how to treat them wit respect. He taught me to be well-mannered to teachers and also girls


The two qualities that I admire about my father is that he will always be there for me that’s what I admire him for the first qualities. The second qualities is he always told me that never ever get married at a young age that’s a great father that can mess your whole life.

Anonymous said...

Christian

My hero is my mom, because she was always there for me except on a quiz and school work. My mom occasionally helps me on my homework. My mom plays with me when she has time. She is a helpful very kind parent, but not just to me also to to my two brothers and my only sister.

veldine said...

my mom is my hero because she had me at 18 years old and she pretty much risked almost everything for me.I like that she took care of me all by herself without nobody, she had to live in a shelter with me because her aunt kicked her out when she was pregnant with me.She had a life with nothing but drama, but she overcome that.When i was about 1 years old when we lived in an apartment, that we still live in today.Another quality that i like about her is that she took care of me by myself without my dad, she is a brave person and she did it without my dad and that is a true hero.

Jose Franco said...

A hero to me will be some one ill look up to and want to be like when i grow up. He will be grate he have a big job make lots of money and thats how i want to be.

He will also be good at sports and me and him can play all the time at any thing. He can give me tip for living a good life and growing up well.

Anonymous said...

Aramis

One of my hero’s is my mom because she has always been there for me and also she has always gave me what needed, and also things I didn’t need such as games. My mom also is one of my hero’s because every time I have a problem she helps me out and tells me what to do. My other hero is my dad because every time I wanted to go buy something my mom is usually working so my dad always takes me where I want to go even though after he takes me he has to go to work its just kind of funny because he drives fast so he wont be late to work its also kind of cool.

Jariel Soto said...

My hero is my oldest sister Madelyn.
- The reason she is my Hero is because she had has many problem’s in the past years. But she has managed to settle down and phase the problems because she knew I was always looking up to her.
- The second reason she is my main hero is because when she was younger and when she was living in Brooklyn. She didn’t have it as good as I did now, but she went to a Public school and got an education, even though many girls didn’t like her because she was the Pretty Spanish Girl. She has set an good example, so far all my sisters has set an good example. But Madelyn I know I can count on her and trust her with anything. Since she is older and more wiser and has been threw twice as much as me.
- When she was working, she was working at Suffolk College, because she had her first baby at age 29. She had to quit since she had the baby early. The last reason she is my Hero and I admire her is because she had many dreams, and she accomplished most of them. But I wouldn’t blaim her for not finishing most of them. But those 3 examples show you why Madelyn Soto is my Hero<3

Anonymous said...

Elina Caban

My hero is my grandmother because she helps me with my problems and she talks to me she tells me stuff that she don't wont to tell no one else. My grandmother tells me if I was doing something wrong and what I was doing right once.


My second hero is my brother Robbie because he helps me with my homework and he pushes me to do better he always makes me feel better when I'm sad he makes sure that i feel so happy then we go out with my sister Eliani and my other brother Jay we sometimes go out to the mall.

Chantel Williams said...

Chantel Williams
My hero is my mom because she’s always there for me. She takes care of me. She’s like my mom and my dad because my dad isn’t in my life. My mom’s friend once said “how can you take care of her without her father in her life?” my mom said she doesn’t know. It’s really hard taking care of me. My dad doesn’t do anything. He thinks he’s in my life but really, he’s not. The people who live with their dad or who sees them a lot are lucky. I don’t even think that he cares about me. That’s why my mom is my hero. She can do anything. My mom is really strong. I love her.

Melissa Rodriguez said...

Melissa Rodriguez


Heroes have special qualities that people admire. Heroes give us examples of the courage and strength it takes to face difficult situations and challenges in life.

Think of someone who is your personal hero. In a well-developed composition, describe this person and explain two qualities you most admire about him or her.




My hero is my parents because they
are the one who brought me to this world. Also they are the one who taught me to be the person I am. My mom is the one who taught me to be nice and respectful to people and treat people how you want to be treated. My dad taught me to never give up and keep going cause in the future it will be helpful. My parents are my heroes cause every time I need help they will always have my back no matter what. My parents show brave, and strong (dad), intelligent, outgoing (mom.)

Anonymous said...

Shaliyah Keene

My hero is my mom. The reason why I chose my mom is because she is always there for me when I need most. My mom is also my hero because she always knows what to do when something is wrong with me. My mom is kind and sweet person. I chose my mom as my hero because I hero is someone you look up to and you admire most. That’s why I chose my mom as my hero. One thing I admire about her is that she protects me all the time. The second thing that I admire about her is that she always knows what to say t me.

Anonymous said...

my uncle is my hero because he is there for me when I have my ups and my downs and when i am in need of something he handles it. What i admire him about is his style i admire his style because his style helps me to be a better kid. and a second thing why i admire him is when i need some one to join in on something my mom or my dad cant do he step up to plate and join that is what a hero does and he is my hero.

mariana ayala said...

Mariana Ayala

My hero in life is my mom because she will do anything to provide for my family and I. She is a role model to me, I observe her and see what she does so I know how to do it just like her. My mom will help me with anything. If I need help with my homework she will help me and if she doesn’t know it we will work it out together. Some day I want to grow up to be just like her. What I like about is that she never gives up she keeps trying no mater what happens. My mom is my hero.

Anonymous said...

I think a hero is like police man or the fire fighters because they both do something that can be a easy way to be heading for death. I think to be a hero it means some who changes something bad about the world and makes a way to just help it be better and the people who volunteer to the jobs are putting there life's into a place of danger to help you and me from danger. And us to can grow up and do the same thing cause the people who helped were once little boys or girls my age. DALE COOPER

Anonymous said...

mnarlin castillo
To me hero is my mother because she was and is a women that has to race me alone since I was 8 years old until now she had no body to help her and she to keep up with me she always said she was never going to let me down my mom had to go to a lot of things in life. The real reason why I think that my mom is a hero is because she doesn’t let me fall she pushes me more and more so that I would never back down.she always says " don't worry about anything that what ever you want you will get even if i have to stop eating to get it for you.my mom was married with my dad for 16 was about to be 17 years, and when they got divorce she always said that it did get hurt that that wasn't going to back her down from helping me and taking care of me alone.

but Martin Luther King JR is also a hero to me because he wanted to help out black people he wanted to stand up for them and make justice he wanted them to be treated equally like the whites where is really wasn't fare for them to be treated like if they where nothing

Anonymous said...

Ricardo

My personal hero is my Dad because he helped me learn how to take care of my self. But pretty much wen hes around and I need him he helps me with what ever it is.

daquari said...

Someone that I admire is my ELA teacher ms.coleman the reason why I like ms.coleman is because she knows that I can do better and she is nice well to me she is. She is a cool teacher. You do not get teachers like her all the time she is one in a million

I also admire my aunt Karea because she told me that she will get me a sidekick and my mom told me that when people say they will give me something do not keep on asking for it and I have been worrying my self about the sidekick and I saw her last night and did not ask her then she called me and said you can me for anything because I am your aunt if you want anything you can ask me for it and she will get that’s why I admire her

JaToya Brown said...

JaToya Brown

A person that I think is a hero is my mom.The reason why she is my hero is because she was the one that made me a better person and let me go to school so I could get a wonderful education.She thought me well and she is the one that made my life become strong and healthy.Without my mom I wouldn't be able to get a marvelous education and would be able.

Anonymous said...

I DO NOT HAVE 1

Anonymous said...

my superhero is my family specially my mom because she is the one who made me and she is the one who brought me to this world.

Deidre Hayman said...

I really don’t know how is my hero, I used to know but know I do not, the person that used to be my hero was my Kitty’s Blacky, Muffin, Daisy, and Patchies. Their were my hero because I could tell them secrets and know one would ever no what it was, My cats are my hero because the all ways put a smile on my face. My cats are the reasons I get up everyday, they are the reasons I come to school and want to learn. This are my cats and they are my hero’s, I love this cats so much that is the final reasons why they are my little hero’s.

akil said...

My hero would be my father. My dad is a well paid working guy who takes care of me. He works as a construction worker as a day job and works as a radio station Dj at night he is always doing what he needs to stay dedicated to his jobs but still always has time for my needs and me. One of his qualities I really admire is strength to never get lazy and give up because it’s thought me that with out the strength to never give up I would not get far. I also admire his talents because he always thinks about where he comes from when he does his job at nights

Anonymous said...

Eliani Caban
Will I am going to say that my hero is my gradmaother because she had helped me with my problems before she had pass on, she also had talk to me about things that what wrong with me for example “ my attutude , and about the mouth that I have, she loved me so much she had also told me things that I didn't even understand.

Manley said...

The hero in my life is my grandmother because she was the one who took care of me and she was my baby-sitter when my parents were out when I was little, and she took me to the doctors and raised me like she was my mother. She is my hero because she has strength that I always wanted from a hero because got hurt in a shooting accident and is in the hospital now. She is alive and that strength tells me that she is my hero. She told me right from wrong, took me to places I never went with my parents, she loved me, she bought me the things that I wanted, and was there for me when I turned one. That is why my grandmother is my hero.

aliyah the brave said said...

My hero is my mom, on her side, my grandmother, my dad, my brother, my sister, my nephew Da'Von, my aunt, my aunt, my uncle, my uncle, my cousin, my other cousin, all ten of my cousins living in Bronx, and queens new York, and on my daddy's side, my grandmother, my aunt my other aunt, my uncle, my uncle, my uncle, and my uncle, my cousin, my other cousin, my other cousin, my other cousin, my other cousin,the reason why all of them are my heroes is because they all taught me one special thing in my life . Each and every one of them loves me and I surely love them all back they are my heroes and most of all they are all my family.

jonathon said...

My hero is my mom because she always there for me. She always put food on the table for me and grandma too because she loves me and she will help me with anything and my mom and untie too. My family they live all around the world like my oldest cousin live at California and my uncles one live at New York and the other ones live at Phoenix so I be visiting them every summer. I got a god brother his name is Randy they live at Florida.


Heroes

Heroes have special qualities that people admire. Heroes give us examples of the courage and strength it takes to face difficult situations and challenges in life.

Anonymous said...

Think of someone who is your personal hero. In a well-developed composition, describe this person and explain two qualities you most admire about him or her.

The person I really admire is my mom because she taught me right from wrong and she always supports me in what I do in every aspect or obstacle in life and she taught me every thing I need to know to succeed in life.She’s the best mother and the whole universe because she loves me shes helpful and cares she feeds me and she puts clothes on my back for me and she’s very nice and she supports me all way and I know she loves me very much.

Anonymous said...

My Mom and Dad are heroes to me. They always are looking out for me. They also show good examples. They brought me in this world. There is not enough things in this world for me to thank them with. To me my Mom and Dad are very very heroic. When I'm sad or mad , there always for me. If I'm having trouble, there always there for me. Don't matter what I'm going through, they are always there for me. I look up to my mom and dad because they care for me. I love my mom and dad.

From: #1 *Raheem* all day

MITRI said...

My hero is my parent they brought me here to be gentlemen and do my work. I seriously think I have a second hero but not any more I on my game doing as my parents taught me. I think I devolved into a man that is a beast. I admire my parent’s cause they brought me here. I am a good kid that gets good grades. My dad tells me right or wrong. I seriously think I can do better but all these girls on, me I cant do nothing but I still do my work.

Yeribel Gonzalez said...

Heroes have special qualities that people admire. Heroes give us examples of the courage and strength it takes to face difficult situations and challenges in life.

The heroes in my life are both my mom and dad. I say that because if it weren’t for them I wouldn’t be here. I also say my dad is my hero because he tells me what is good for me and what is bad for me. Also my mother I admire her because when I am sick she makes me feel better, when I want something she makes sure I get it, when I am sad she makes me happy, so why not admirer someone that has always been there for you when you need them. Even dough my dad left to the Dominican Republic to go with my sick grandfather, my mom took his place and her place. That’s why I admirer her and love her.

Anonymous said...

Kishawra

Think of someone who is your personal hero. In a well-developed composition, describe this person and explain two qualities you most admire about him or her.

My hero is my Nana. She is my hero because she takes care of me. My Nana is also my hero because she knows how to take care of a cut because. She knows when to put on my stories on weekends from 12:00-1:30. The other reason she is my hero is because she gets me out of school trouble or whatever. That is why I find her my hero.

Anonymous said...

Think of someone who is your personal hero. In a well-developed composition, describe this person and explain two qualities you most admire about him or her.

The person I really admire is my mom because she gave birth to me, she taught me right from wrong and she always supports me in what I do in every aspect or obstacle in life and she taught me every thing I need to know to succeed in life.She’s the best mother and the whole universe because she loves me shes helpful and cares she feeds me and she puts clothes on my back for me and she’s very nice and she supports me all way and I know she loves me very much.

Danielle

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Sharon Cambra said...

Heroes have special qualities that people admire. Heroes give us examples of the courage and strength it takes to face difficult situations and challenges in life.

Think of someone who is your personal hero. In a well-developed composition, describe this person and explain two qualities you most admire about him or her.




My hero is my mom because she taught me how to read, write, how to mess with my dad, and how to bake. But my other hero is my grandmother because she taught me how to use my manners like please and thank you. She also taught me how to count money, and she taught me how to have fun.

Dimarie said...

My hero is my mother. Because she is the one that tells me whet is good and not good to do.She tells me what is the right thing to do. When I do what I need to do and I don't do it she gets mad at me because she knows I should know better then I do some times.

korlu ama jallah said...

My hero is my hero is my mom because she raise me well. She taught me not to be a fried of people that are my size or couple years older then me. She taught me how to be a woman and stand up for my self. She is also my hero because we look alike and she cares for me. My mom is my hero because she never puts me down. She is my hero because she never put me down or any one put me down. She is my hero because she makes me fell special. She let me express my self to her and let me tell her how I fell. She is my hero because she spoiled me a lot and I get what ever I want.

My other hero is my dad because he also spoiled me a lot because I’m the only girl for him I’m like his little egg that has never been broken. He never let any one hit me in any way. those are my hero.

Avianna said...

My personal hero is my older brother. He is always there for me when I need help with homework he helps, me when I need someone to talk to I always go to him. He is a great role model because he wants to get some where in life for example since he was a little boy he wanted to be a police officer and now he is in the police cadet academy working towards being a police officer. He always tells me go for what you want in life because life is too short to waste. Another quality that me brother shows is honesty he is honest when you need advice on something he will tell you the right thing to do. One last thing about my brother is he is a leader he is the oldest out of my moms kids ad he has always been the leader to all of us and that’s why I call him my hero.

Anonymous said...

To me a hero is somebody that will pretect tou and keep you safe at all times. Like to me my hero is my family i wouldent say just my mother because shes not the only hero i have so i say my who entire family and even if i cant remember all of them. But the most out of all is my mother because she takes care of me she makes sure that i have close on my back. And she will always always make sure that i will have something to 1.live in 2.have a job 3. and not end up in the streets and thats why she is a hero to me.

Troi Newton

Deidre Hayman said...

I really don’t know how is my hero, I used to know but know I do not, the person that used to be my hero was my Kitty’s Blacky, Muffin, Daisy, and Patchies. Their were my hero because I could tell them secrets and know one would ever no what it was, My cats are my hero because the all ways put a smile on my face. My cats are the reasons I get up everyday, they are the reasons I come to school and want to learn. This are my cats and they are my hero’s, I love this cats so much that is the final reasons why there are my little hero’s.

Anonymous said...

The person who I personally admire is my brother because even when we do not like each other he is their when i need him so that is why he
is my Hero.

Anonymous said...

my hero is my brother because he is their even when we do not like each
other he is their for me

my other hero is my father because
he makes me happy .

Ashley