The local school committee is seeking ideas to improve your school. These ideas will be discussed during meetings with students, teachers, parents, administrators, and other interested parties. The changes proposed by students will be seriously considered since students are the reason for the school’s existence.
Choose one change that might improve your school for all students. Write a persuasive response explaining why your suggested change in an improvement. Give at least two reasons to show how your suggestion will improve your school.
Remember, you must argue in a convincing manner so that the school committee will understand and agree with your position.
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I think one change we could make to improve this school is to have free time. I think that having free time could improve this school because us kids work hard every day with no free time from working. Yea kids are supposed to do work in school but every kid needs a break once and a while. I guarantee that just about all students will do 50% better than they do know because kids are playful. If kids are bored in school all day most kids slack a little bit. So this free time could be a time when kids can just hang out and relax if teachers would like or it could be a time when kids can just have a little fun or anything that has to do with taking there minds and giving them a little rest. Then after free time kids will be ready for anything you throw at them (not literally).
Improving my school committee is important especially when children are trying to learn using one book , sitting at a crowded table with students , and a lot of noise is going threw your ear.
Trying to one book with 50 other students is impossible because people keep taking it .it happens to me all the time at my school in my class .I think the students should be concerned about it because the school should try to order more books. I believe this because if your trying to share a book at a crowded table you cannot focus on the work you can only focus on the book coming your way so you can read. This is what I believe.
Another way is why wont people just put on our laptop so it can more peaceful because when you are sitting at a table and a lot of people are talking and you cant even hear your self think .and I get so mad I just want to leave that’s why I think they should download it on or computer or just give us more books.
My last is they should do everything I just did because it make my opions more helpful and it would help my school because then people would be able to learn more peaceful and they would get more smarter and it would be less crowed and students will be more comfortable.
A change I would make to better our school would be to have a summer program this would be very helpful because there won’t be a lot of people in summer school all summer, you could have a longer summer and you don’t spend all summer learning every thing you already know. In this program all you have to do is make up the work you missed. For instance if you don’t read as many books as your required. All you need to do is read as many books you need to read then you could leave. How ever if you don’t meet the requirements you get held back. This program would also give the students a head start on next year’s requirements.
This isn’t summer school. In summer school you can’t leave when you meet the requirements. In this program you can. In summer school you just relearn what you already learned in school. However you could not attend this program if you are failing because you don’t understand any of the work. You could only attend this program if you need to make up some work.
A change I would make to better our school would be to have a summer program this would be very helpful because there won’t be a lot of people in summer school all summer, you could have a longer summer and you don’t spend all summer learning every thing you already know. In this program all you have to do is make up the work you missed. For instance if you don’t read as many books as your required. All you need to do is read as many books you need to read then you could leave. How ever if you don’t meet the requirements you get held back. This program would also give the students a head start on next year’s requirements.
This isn’t summer school. In summer school you can’t leave when you meet the requirements. In this program you can. In summer school you just relearn what you already learned in school. However you could not attend this program if you are failing because you don’t understand any of the work. You could only attend this program if you need to make up some work.
I’m going to write about one thing I would think might improve my school for all students. Well I would want the schools to work on students behavior because some students talk back to the teachers and some times they don’t even say anything to them, There would be less problem with others students, and also things would work out better and faster and the teachers wont have to be stopping just to tell that one person to get them self together. Anther thing why I chose that students should work on their behavior because the students that are doing the right thing in class get in trouble for other students and that’s not fair.
My suggestion should be improve in school because when the teachers are teaching that teacher would have to stop in the middle of the class just to tell that one person to get it together and also we could do things much faster and at the end of class we would have time so that the teacher would answers some questions we have and to explain some things that we didn’t understand about the lesson. I also choose this suggestion because The others students are doing the right thing and just because one person decide to do the wrong thing the whole class would get in trouble just because that one person and I think that’s not fair because the students that did the write thing should not have to get in trouble for other kids mistakes.
I also chose this suggestion because I think that that’s not fair when a student want to act in class or talk back to the teacher the thing that sometimes gets me mad is that sometimes the teachers don’t say anything to them and if they do say something to them it would be pointless because they are still are going to act rude and so what ever they want in class and I also don’t like when some students ask the teachers if they can go to the bathroom but they don’t notice is that they are given them in trouble because they are just going to play with their friends .Also some students are not being good community members to each other.This is why I chose that students should work on their behavior in school and maybe even outside of school.
Our school should have free hour, because the students are bored in their other classes, you should be able to have fun and relax at school, and we don’t have recess anymore. Once it hits first period everyone is bored and tired. A lot of people say that you shouldn’t have fun at school, but that isn’t true. Since we are in junior high there is no more recess and we do need our exercise.
Adults say that breakfast is the most important meal of the day, but breakfast or not once it hits first period you are usually are so tired that you can’t even keep your eyes open. Everyone is bored and all you’re doing is work, work, and more work. If school is supposed to get you set for life it should have some fun within it as well. This generation of teens is more stressed out than ever just because of school, so there should be some time to relax and have fun. A lot of kids dread junior high because there’s no more recess, so with free hour that would give us time to listen to music, dance, sing, draw, talk, and just be teens and have fun.
If free hour does come to BPS all of the students in the lgf will be the most grateful kids that any adult has ever seen. We really need to take a break from all that work, even the teachers could use a break from all of their hard work. Everyone will be happy, and it’s better to teach… and learn when everyone’s happy.
By: Gabrielle Joseph
My Fight
I agree my school does need improvement and here is why, they should lower lunches for kids, they should let kids not where uniform at least once week so kids can be happier, and let kids have a little brake for a couple of minuets. Some kids don’t get any lunch because they need to pay to much money and some parents cant afford it. Me myself wants their to be at least one day of the week that we don’t have to wear uniform so kids can have a more pleasant week. Also an improvement can be to let kids get a free time so they don’t get so exhausted. The reason I feel these can be improvement is so kids can have fun in school and have fun while learning.
Have you ever imagine kids enjoying school? Well these might be ways to get kids exited about school. Take it from a kid me. I this what school should be lie so we can have fun while learning, and adults see that you teachers aren’t boring at all and so we can be rated a five star school with best attendance. If that how school was, then I won’t mind getting up at 7:00am. I bet other kids won’t either.
I think Boston Public schools are fine except for the way that some schools handle fights or any violence .I used to go to school in Framingham and the schools just seem different to me. I’m really not just saying this because I miss my old friends the schools just have a way different feel to them. And it is not a good one. Like the way they handle fights in the John Marshall. The teachers seem as if they don’t care and treat it as an every day thing. And how they teat the students after a fight they just punish one of the information that one of their classmates give that are probity taking sides. Some teachers judge a student because of a fight when they don’t even know what happened they just heard.
This even causes some students to not want to come to school. And in some schools there is a lot of bullying not going to say names. I just know that we could use an improvement on the way schools handle fights and bullying
Our school should have a bigger school fund because we are going to need more school supplies, in case we need to remodel the school for more students or when accidents happen, and to afford school lunch. We need more school supplies for school projects that the students end up doing. Remodeling the school is important when it comes to emergencies like fires. Affording school lunch is important because students have to have a decent lunch with many different vitamins and nutrition during the school day.
More school supplies will help us because we would need them for projects or field trip assignments. The projects could be based on anything we have learned throughout the year so far. Field trip assignments could help us do many more fun projects to see if any student has learned something. Or we could use those school supplies for class when we don’t have any. More school supplies would help so much.
Remodeling the school could be very important when emergencies happen. A fire could burn the school down and remodeling the school could still help us have our wonderful school. Any emergencies have an impact on our school. Sometime maybe there won’t be enough room in our school so we might have to remodel it so we can have more new students. So would remodeling be important to our school?
School lunch may be disgusting and gross but students here at the Lilla G. Federick Pilot middle school have to have a healthy and nutritious lunch. We need to have the energy to last the entire day in school without being hungry. Some students go without lunch because they have to pay and I say that they should not pay because that is really unfair to them because others don’t have to pay. That is what I think our local school committee should do.
One change we could make to improve this school is to have free time. Free Time could help students pay more attention in school, stay awake if they ever fall asleep in class, and it will improve the way they think about things. I think that having free time could help students pay more attention because they will know that fun time is over and it's time to learn or maybe because they know that free time is coming and they try to do the best they can before they go to free time, I think free time will improve the way they think because us kids work hard every day with no free time from learning, Yea kids are supposed to do work in school but every kid needs a break once and a while because some kids are just so active that they don't do there best on their work. I guarantee that just about all students will do 50% better than they do know because kids are playful and need a little break. If kids are bored in school all day most kids slack a little bit. So this free time could be a time when kids can just hang out and relax if teachers would like or it could be a time when kids can just have a little fun or anything that has to do with taking there minds and giving them a little rest. Then after free time kids will be ready for anything you throw at them (not literally).
Yes!, Improving the school, especially improve the school lunch, laptops and the books. Improve school lunch because the lunch slows us down or makes us tired, we need new laptops because they are getting really dirty or the memory is bad and the books are ripping and getting old and decomposing. We, the students really don’t like lunch. Also, our laptops are getting older and older. The books are ripping and we can’t read them because some pages are missing. So we should improve the school fast! If we improve, we learn nothing. I guarantee that just about all students will do 60% better with the changes.
Improve my school!! I believe that if you change the school lunch, students will eat more or have more energy, but if you don’t we won’t eat and we’ll get horrible grades. Next, you should change our laptops. Why? We can’t keep reusing the same the laptops. It is recycling, but we always lost our memory and we can’t log in. So get new laptops every 2 to 4 years now. Then, we need new books. The reason we need new books is because we want a read a book but we can’t. Why? Because the book is to hard or something is wrong with it. You see, we should IMPROVE THE SCHOOL. We need to pump up the learning and more.
Yes!! Improving the school would really it better. Students and teachers here work hard at my school. Maybe, if we improve we won’t slack. Improve the lunch, laptops and the books. That is what we need to improve here. Right now and fast because aren’t going to take it any more. So I say yes improve my school. Just for us, to help us even.
Our school is looking for some changes that can improve the way things go around here. Especially the things dealing with uniform, breakfast, and tardy students. Students are not bringing uniform. Not going to breakfast on time, and also coming late when they walk or been driven. Things need to change.
One change should be breakfast doors closed by 9:00 to students that are not on buses. This change should improve because when some students are outside they try to go eat breakfast like at 9:15 and then when they go up stairs they don’t get their laptops. So then later on if they have a blog or another assignment they couldn’t do it. Also students that walk or get driven shouldn’t be coming up stairs around 9:20. This change should improve.
The second change should be that if students don’t come with uniform on Nurse D shouldn’t pass it out. Why? because its their responsibility to have it on. If they don’t have it on they have to go home and get it, and if they don’t have one at home they have to buy the shirts from Mr.Cross. I know this sounds strict but its us students responsibility to bring uniform.
We need more materials especially when we have a test, projects, and everyday learning. Every day we keep on using materials. Pens, paper, and ect we use all types of materials. We need paper do a lot of things. We also need so read on and find out about my two reasons on why we need more materials.
First reasons why I think we need materials because, when we are doing a project and they said you need one book per person. And you see that you have to share your book with someone else you might get upset. You might feel upset because, you may not like sharing. Or you don’t like that person. There should be more things for us to use. Even paper, schools are running down are paper. Also pencil student use then but they don’t get returned.
My second reason why I think we need more materials is because, when students are doing a project and maybe they made a mistake and they did it on both sides of the paper or their pencil keeps breaking. Then teacher said it has to be neat. They should be able to get one more of paper or what ever they need. The government needs to give money to school so they could go and buy school supplies. Sometime the school gives you some supplies cause your parents couldn’t buy it for their child. Or an other student give or let them use their supplies then the parents get mad cause they got to keep on buying the supplies. Then the parent might start calling the school and telling them why don’t they give them supplies if the student don’t have it. But the school can’t give the supplies for students if they don’t have the money to but some supplies.
January 11,2010
We need more materials especially when we have a test, projects, and everyday learning. Every day we keep on using materials. Pens, paper, and ect we use all types of materials. We need paper do a lot of things. We also need so read on and find out about my two reasons on why we need more materials.
First reasons why I think we need materials because, when we are doing a project and they said you need one book per person. And you see that you have to share your book with someone else you might get upset. You might feel upset because, you may not like sharing. Or you don’t like that person. There should be more things for us to use. Even paper, schools are running down are paper. Also pencil student use then but they don’t get returned.
My second reason why I think we need more materials is because, when students are doing a project and maybe they made a mistake and they did it on both sides of the paper or their pencil keeps breaking. Then teacher said it has to be neat. They should be able to get one more of paper or what ever they need. The government needs to give money to school so they could go and buy school supplies. Sometime the school gives you some supplies cause your parents couldn’t buy it for their child. Or an other student give or let them use their supplies then the parents get mad cause they got to keep on buying the supplies. Then the parent might start calling the school and telling them why don’t they give them supplies if the student don’t have it. But the school can’t give the supplies for students if they don’t have the money to but some supplies.
That’s important because the school committee needs to keep us active and motivated for school. Health is important too because no one wants to be made fun of. Some people would say, “ hey look at the obese girl” or “ here piggy piggy ”. No one would like that. Please make our lives better and healthy for this school. Health class is important too just as gym. Health class can help for your body and your future life. This school should have a longer gym period especially when some people are not fit, not active at home, and don’t do after school sports.
If school is supposed to set my life goal it is to be healthy and be active during work or while in college. Everyone’s life goal is to go to college, whose isn’t? I think that this school committee should help our school improve to have more students that can get an education. If you don’t get an education from gym, then what will you have?
My Fight
I agree my school does need improvement and here is why, they should lower lunches for kids, they should let kids not where uniform at least once week so kids can be happier, and let kids have a little brake for a couple of minuets. Some kids don’t get any lunch because they need to pay to much money and some parents cant afford it. Me myself wants their to be at least one day of the week that we don’t have to wear uniform so kids can have a more pleasant week. Also an improvement can be to let kids get a free time so they don’t get so exhausted. The reason I feel these can be improvement is so kids can have fun in school and have fun while learning.
Have you ever imagine kids enjoying school? Well these might be ways to get kids exited about school. Take it from a kid, me. I this what school should be like so we can have fun while learning, and adults see that you teachers aren’t boring at all and so we can be rated a five star school with best attendance. If that how school was, then I won’t mind getting up at 7:00am. I bet other kids won’t either.
Malachi Hernandez
If I Malachi Hernandez can change anything about school. It would be Wearing Uniform. I don’t like wearing uniform. It is not my thing, It’s is not cool, and its extremely aggravating. Especially buying it. If your school has a uniform shirt then its mad aggy. You have to waste about $15 on a cheap shirt that you are going to wear for the whole school year. Then it rips the second day you wear it.
I know for sure that everyone would like not wearing uniform. And I am talking straight from my heart. This is what I feel like inside. And now I get to let it out. I get to express my opinions and myself about wearing uniform. Hopefully the superintendent will change her mind about wearing uniform.
January 12, 2010
Our school needs to have healthier lunch, free hour,
and the students should pay 25 cents to eat candy in class. We should have healthier lunches because the lunches we eat might have too much fat in there that will make us fatter. We should have free hour on Fridays last period the people who have turn in there
Home work in all classes don’t have the teacher yell at them and listen should have their teacher ask other teachers if they need help or the could go down and the gym and play till times up. And the people who don’t do what there suppose to can stay upstairs and do the work and the students who did good have to come back from what they were doing at 3:15.Students should have to pay 25 cents to the teachers and the 25 cents lasts till the end of class cause some students deserve to do that.
This is my practice thesis statement thank you for reading bye
A change I would recommend to our school is a program that helps people who don’t have interest in school but need to have the much knowledge as possible. Like people having a hard time on their personal time, people with rules to do in school but they don’t put interest into them, and think they are not ready.
This program does not have to be all learning. It has to be about important things that you need to work on in life, make you feel that you are somebody who is known and appreciated, and thinks that they can be successful towards their feuture.
This school should have a longer gym period especially when some people are not fit, not active at home, and don’t do after school sports. That’s important because the school committee needs to keep us active and motivated for school. Health is important too because no one wants to be made fun of. Some people would say, “ hey look at the obese girl” or “ here piggy piggy ”. No one would like that. Please make our lives better and healthy for this school. Health class is important too just as gym. Health class can help for your body and your future life.
If school is supposed to set my life goal it is to be healthy and be active during work or while in college. Everyone’s life goal is to go to college, whose isn’t? I think that this school committee should help our school improve to have more students that can get an education. If you don’t get an education from gym, then what will you have?
Malachi Hernandez
If I Malachi Hernandez can change anything about the school committee it would be Wearing Uniform. I don’t like wearing uniform. It is not my thing, It’s is not cool, and its extremely aggravating. Especially buying it. If your school has a uniform shirt then its mad aggy. You have to waste about $15 on a cheap shirt that you are going to wear for the whole school year. Then it rips the second day you wear it.
I know for sure that everyone would like not wearing uniform. And I am talking straight from my heart. This is what I feel like inside. And now I get to let it out. I get to express my opinions and myself about wearing uniform. Hopefully the superintendent will change her mind about wearing uniform.
JANUARY 11, 2010
Would sound have better school lunches, it would help us think better, we might even feel better, and the food could also be healthy. If we are hungry how can we think, all we are going to think about is food. Some people also get mad when they don’t eat lunch because it is like eating trash. There is too much cheese on the pizza; there should be less cheese and more pizza sauce.
Whenever I get hungry I can’t think, it becomes stay focus. I think about food and sometime feel as sick as a dog because I’m so hungry. This brings me to my next point a lot of kids get mad when they don`t eat because it nasty, then when they go back to class they are rood to the teachers and the people around them. Sometime they want to eat the school lunch but it not heaithy, for an example the pizza has to much oil & cheese, every bite you take oil gose on your arm and the cheese drip’s with on your face and your close. Please do what ever you can to change the school lunch.
The school lunches are disgusting especially when they give pizza every Friday, when we have to drink it with plan milk, and when we cant get seconds. Its not fun eating pizza every Friday its going to get boring then no one is going to have lunch. If we keep on giving plan milk no one is going to drink it. If the school doesn’t give out seconds, who will eat lunch the first time.
The school should give out tacos on Friday especially when every body likes tacos, students will eat them, they will ask the other students for theirs, and when we give out seconds every body will come up. If the school gives out tacos every Friday every body will eat them because we all like tacos. The students will eat them because they taste good and we all like them. If you liked tacos a lot, you might ask another students for his/her taco. If the school gives seconds all the students will come write up and ask if they can have two more instead of one.
Practicing thesis statements
☺ Yes, I do have an idea for improving our school. The idea to improving the school is that the teacher should make the school a little exiting, instead of just talking, and giving out a lot of homework. And not letting us be able to have recess or go out side and hang out with our friends. My guess to it is that to make school more exiting you have to give them a chance to make their decision to what they want to do for at least half an hour. Maybe on a Friday we could all sit down as a community and work together or discus surten things like if we did all our school work we can do something enjoyable.
Maybe the teacher can bring in board games and other things that take at least half an hour. We all might agree on that (teachers). The reason I choose this was because when kids are learning they expect something exciting along with it. On of my examples is when we were doing work our teachers assigned us work to do. It was a project that we had to work on together and that gave the students an opportunity to get out of there seats, and work on a exciting activity instead of just writing and reading. My father used to tell me it’s always ok to have fun once in a while no matter where you are. We do things fun but some times you just don’t realize it.
One change we could make to improve this school is to have free time,because free time can help students pay more attention in school, stay awake if they ever fall asleep in class, and it will improve the way they think about things. I think that having free time could help students pay more attention because they will know that fun time is over and it's time to learn or maybe because they know that free time is coming and they try to do the best they can before they go to free time, I think free time will improve the way they think because us kids work hard every day with no free time from learning, I know kids are supposed to do work in school but every kid needs a break once and a while because some kids are just so active that they don't do there best on their work. I guarantee that just about all students will do 50% better than they do know because kids are playful and need a little break. If kids are bored in school all day most kids slack a little bit. So this free time could be a time when kids can just hang out and relax if teachers would like or it could be a time when kids can just have a little fun or anything that has to do with taking there minds and giving them a little rest. Then after free time kids will be ready for anything you throw at them (not literally).
Our school should really improve in the students behavior because some students talk back to the teachers and some times they don’t even say anything to them, There would be less problem with others students, and also things would work out better and faster and the teachers wont have to be stopping just to tell that one person to get them self together, students should work on their behavior because the students that are doing the right thing in class get in trouble for other students and that’s not fair.
My suggestion should be improve in school because when the teachers are teaching that teacher would have to stop in the middle of the class just to tell that one person to get it together and also we could do things much faster and at the end of class we would have time so that the teacher would answers some questions we have and to explain some things that we didn’t understand about the lesson. I also choose this suggestion because The others students are doing the right thing and just because one person decide to do the wrong thing the whole class would get in trouble just because that one person and I think that’s not fair because the students that did the write thing should not have to get in trouble for other kids mistakes.
I also chose this suggestion because I think that that’s not fair when a student want to act in class or talk back to the teacher the thing that sometimes gets me mad is that sometimes the teachers don’t say anything to them and if they do say something to them it would be pointless because they are still are going to act rude and so what ever they want in class and I also don’t like when some students ask the teachsers if they can go to the bathroom but they don’t notice is that they are given them in trouble beacsue they are just going to play with their friends .Also some students are not being good community members to each other.This is why I chose that students should work on their behavior in school and maybe even outside of school.
shut up
Improving schools
I think one change we could make to improve of community for students is having better food because most kids don’t eat this nasty lunch or breakfast because they don’t be putting no salt on it and it tastes nasty and if students just leave home without eating breakfast and they don’t want to eat school breakfast than they wont have the proper nutrients to think or learn. Another thing I think we should improve is how late school starts, I think we should change the school time from 8:30 to 2:30 because if we start the school at 9:00 like usually we’ll have to end at 3:30 and some student have places to go and things to do.
One thing I think that will help students learn more is if schools would serve better lunch and breakfast. I think that students probably don’t learn as much as they need to because maybe they don’t have as much energy as their body needs, because of the fact that breakfast in needed in our bodies and without breakfast we will not have no energy to learn. Students probably don’t eat breakfast because they are not interested in the breakfast that is given to them. I also think that every BPS should serve better lunches. I think that maybe they should make the food with more flavor because the food really never taste like nothing, I think they should use a little bit of salt in their rice and more seasoning in their chicken. Another thing I think will help students learn if they sell their snacks at a cheaper price. I think that students paying 1 dollar for a little juice is way to expensive. I think the juices should cost about 50 cents or about 75 at max. The reason why I think they should lower the price is because they would make more money if the lower the price because students wont have a problem spending their money because they wont feel like their getting gypped off. Those are some things I think will help students learn more.
People think we should have more time to finish assignments students need to work on. Assignments take time to finish but teachers give students less time to work on assignments they haven’t finished yet. People take time to finish projects, assignments, and paperwork. This idea will give people more time to finish things.
The one thing that could make or school better is have more free time because we could get just a 30 minute of relax and then we could do that stuff and then the next thing you are confused . Then you would be able to relax and cram lots of thing in you mind and you would make a better improvement and I would say that people would say and I people could not have to play around . people could not have to do all the thing they have to do they could relax people in school would not have to add so much information going into there head and then burst in confusion people would have to say but think that would say that people would say that would say that and I would say that people would explode in anger. People would say that you could not understand and I would say that people would be very confused and I would say that people would say that about people and that’s why we need to relax and also have a little and I would say that and I would do that.
The one thing that could make or school better is have more free time because we could get just a 30 minute of relax and then we could do that stuff and then the next thing you are confused . Then you would be able to relax and cram lots of thing in you mind and you would make a better improvement and I would say that people would say and I people could not have to play around . people could not have to do all the thing they have to do they could relax people in school would not have to add so much information going into there head and then burst in confusion people would have to say but think that would say that people would say that would say that and I would say that people would explode in anger. People would say that you could not understand and I would say that people would be very confused and I would say that people would say that about people and that’s why we need to relax and also have a little and I would say that and I would do that.
My opinion for a rule to change is that school charging kids for school lunch because its expensive, rude, and pointless. I also think that it should stop because the money that kids bring to school should be for something they want to get like snack or a book fair something that they are selling and they want to buy not for lunch why are you going to charge a child for food and some not if they are going to stay in a place for hours?
shut up now
Jocileny barbosa
Ms Coleman
6b 210
Thesis Statement
Pizza will help use improve in school because it has great salt nice cheese and the Amazon taste of the good chicken in side and I think that will help the student because a lot of the student loves pizza and I think they will learn more because when they eat the pizza that they love they will learn more when they eat it than after they eat that good pizza they will have more time to learn more and they will do more of the work that they are suppose to do and they will work harder on they work that they are suppose to do and they will have a nice belly full of some good pizza.
We think that there should not be not uniform because then more students won’t come here, cause student fell that they got to where the same cloth again, again, That you will get less student then what you think. Student will be happy because every middle school they like go to haves to wear uniform. Some student get tired of wearing the same thing like every day like if the LGF don’t got to wear uniform like every Friday it will be better.
TO ABLE TO GO ON AIM BECAUSE WE CHAT TO PEOPLE AKS THEM QUESTION ABOUT THE WORK AND BE GOOD SO WE WILL BE ABLE TO GO ON AIM.WHEN WE CHAT WITH OUR CLASSMATE WE WON’T ME SOUND AND IF THE HAS TO ME A INPOTRIN CALL SHE TALK WITHOUT US MAKE NOSEZ. AND IF A SUDENT WAS NOT HERE THEY CAN AKS THEM WHAT THEY HAVE FOR HOME WORK OR WHATDID THEY LEARN IN A SCHOOL. A ND IF WE COME ON AIM WE WOULD BE HAVE A+ LIKE CRAZY TO BE ABL TO WEAR WHAT EVER WE WANT BECAUSE WE CAN HAVE THE FREEDO TO WEAR WHAT WE TO NOT THE SCHOOL WE SHOULD PICK WHAT WE WANT NOT WHAT THE SCHOOL AND WE WANT FREEDOM
TO ABLE TO GO ON AIM BECAUSE WE CHAT TO PEOPLE AKS THEM QUESTION ABOUT THE WORK AND BE GOOD SO WE WILL BE ABLE TO GO ON AIM.WHEN WE CHAT WITH OUR CLASSMATE WE WON’T ME SOUND AND IF THE HAS TO ME A INPOTRIN CALL SHE TALK WITHOUT US MAKE NOSEZ. AND IF A SUDENT WAS NOT HERE THEY CAN AKS THEM WHAT THEY HAVE FOR HOME WORK OR WHATDID THEY LEARN IN A SCHOOL. A ND IF WE COME ON AIM WE WOULD BE HAVE A+ LIKE CRAZY TO BE ABL TO WEAR WHAT EVER WE WANT BECAUSE WE CAN HAVE THE FREEDO TO WEAR WHAT WE TO NOT THE SCHOOL WE SHOULD PICK WHAT WE WANT NOT WHAT THE SCHOOL AND WE WANT FREEDOM
One thing that would make the school better is to not truing gum in the class when the teacher is talk, not talking in line and to have free time. If the children stop truing gum the school will go faster by learning and it will be easer if they stop talking in line. Ever children in the school billing want free time so am I. if we get free time I thing the children would be a better learner, reader, writer in ever way any way. I not saying this because my school that I was gong gave us free time it’s just because we get a lot of home work and work to do
The one thing that has to change in my school is better lunches some of the lunches are disgusting, nasty, and disturbing because the lunch ladies always give the good food lunches to the students and sometimes my class is late for lunch we get the yucky food. Better lunches will be better then the yucky lunches. It will be a miracle if my school had better lunches. Some students like the disgusting lunches. That’s the only change that I want.
Isaiah Martinez
Ms. Coleman
6B 210
January 12, 2010 the changes My School Better food chouses will help us learn better because it could help students pay more attention in school stay awake if they ever fall asleep in class, and it will improve the way they think about things. Because the lunch that we have her at the lgf slows us down or makes us tired. We, the students really don’t like lunch. If schools would serve better lunch and breakfast . I think that students probably don’t learn as much as they need to because maybe they don’t have as much energy as their body needs, because of the fact that breakfast in needed in our bodies and without breakfast we will not have no energy to learn.
The changes in school
The students in the Lilla G Frederick pilot middle school should learn how to get in proper line order in the third tile because if you dot get in line in order you can get hurt cause we are all going every were around the place and the students can crash and people need space because this school is very small.
And the school haves to much kids inside the school.
The Frederick school have lots of little kids and sick kids they can crash into them and hurt them not on purpose.
But if we were in line order and on the third tile nothing like that couldn’t happened.
Also when you are not on the third tile someone can bmp into you and hurt you and another thing could happened is if you don’t like a person don’t crash to them or talk in line because you can get in serous trouble by your teacher because you wasn’t listing to them and that’s how you get in trouble by not following the rules what the teacher says.
And you always need to be behind the person in front of you because if you don’t you are going the wrong set of way and when u don’t look forward because it will be your felt if you bump into someone and the person gets hurt and the reason you get in trouble is because you wasn’t looking to the person in front of you.
And you always need to be in task in the line.
Also we need to learn how to get in line in order and in the person in front of you.
The changes in school
The students in the Lilla G Frederick pilot middle school should learn how to get in proper line order in the third tile because if you dot get in line in order you can get hurt cause we are all going every were around the place and the students can crash and people need space because this school is very small.
And the school haves to much kids inside the school.
The Frederick school have lots of little kids and sick kids they can crash into them and hurt them not on purpose.
But if we were in line order and on the third tile nothing like that couldn’t happened.
Also when you are not on the third tile someone can bmp into you and hurt you and another thing could happened is if you don’t like a person don’t crash to them or talk in line because you can get in serous trouble by your teacher because you wasn’t listing to them and that’s how you get in trouble by not following the rules what the teacher says.
And you always need to be behind the person in front of you because if you don’t you are going the wrong set of way and when u don’t look forward because it will be your felt if you bump into someone and the person gets hurt and the reason you get in trouble is because you wasn’t looking to the person in front of you.
And you always need to be in task in the line.
Also we need to learn how to get in line in order and in the person in front of you.
One change I think this school should go on more field trips because we can learn the values and importance of partnership, for excitement in learning and to keep students from getting into trouble. And these things will also make kids stop doing drugs , it will also want to make kids stop skipping school and care more about their education so maybe some day you can become something in life.
Another change that I think they should add to the school is letting kids eat candy because it helps them concentrate on their work, it helps us have electrical brain pulses and makes us feel good . And these are also things that will help improve the school society in the future.
Eda
The changes in school
The students in the Lilla G Frederick pilot middle school should learn how to get in proper line order in the third tile because if you dot get in line in order you can get hurt cause we are all going every were around the place and the students can crash and people need space because this school is very small.
And the school haves to much kids inside the school.
The Frederick school have lots of little kids and sick kids they can crash into them and hurt them not on purpose.
But if we were in line order and on the third tile nothing like that couldn’t happened.
Also when you are not on the third tile someone can bmp into you and hurt you and another thing could happened is if you don’t like a person don’t crash to them or talk in line because you can get in serous trouble by your teacher because you wasn’t listing to them and that’s how you get in trouble by not following the rules what the teacher says.
And you always need to be behind the person in front of you because if you don’t you are going the wrong set of way and when u don’t look forward because it will be your felt if you bump into someone and the person gets hurt and the reason you get in trouble is because you wasn’t looking to the person in front of you.
And you always need to be in task in the line.
Also we need to learn how to get in line in order and in the person in front of you.
A pool is the best way to improve our school because we exercise in water, we could learn how to swim, and it could be another active sport like basketball and soccer. We would be able to learn the skills in how to swim. Also instead of soccer and basketball being the only to sports we could have a swimming team. It could have been the sport some kids been waiting for. We will have to require our own equipment.
If we were to have a swimming pool at our school it would be a great way to boost our exercise. Water makes us work harder, because it slows us down. My swimming coach told me that we burn more calories in the water then out of water. It’s like running on the moon. Some people could learn how to swim if they already don’t know how too.
One change that I would make to our school is NO UNIFORMS because we shouldn’t be forced to wear uniforms, we shouldn’t have to wear the same clothes everyday, and we shouldn’t have to wear uniforms because we shouldn’t be looking like everyone in the school. Uniforms are hideous. Some students don’t pay attention to their work they pay attention to how they look because their worried about what they are wearing. But if they we get to choose their outfits we wouldn’t be worried about what were wearing because we choose to wear that we wasn’t forced to wear that.
My suggestion will improve the school because we would stop worrying about how we look in the uniforms but we will start to pay more attention in class. We will get better grades because we wont have to go to the bathrooms to look at how we look. We would also learn important facts that should be learning instead of going to the bathroom. And we will all be happy because we wont be forced to wear uniforms. We will all appreciate this. Yea!
We should have language classes so we can speak to people, who only speak that curtain language, translate for help and learn new words from the foreigner. We should have language classes so we can learn from them and they can learn our language from us. We should also have this class so we can translate to them if they would need help with their work or homework. Last but not least if we learn some languages from this class we can talk to people that know how to speak it and we can learn new words from each language we learn.
The Boston public schools should not wear uniform. One reason why we shouldn’t have to wear uniform is that kids in general like to express their selves with clothes. Another reason why we shouldn’t wear uniform is that kids like there own fashion instead of wearing khaki and a navy blue shirt that has our school name on it. One other reason why we should not wear uniform is that kids don’t fell like spending money buying school uniform. My opinion is that The uniform is tacky.
One change I think would make our school better is, we can sort of make a cool lounge in the hallway like make it a relaxing community room like in the center in the academy were the big white board. We could add things in to the room like snacks, games, and in side a little movie area. I think we should make that area because for kids who cant concentrate well should go there because maybe they will feel better now that they’re, in a calm relaxation. Now they can think more but on if the teachers, suggests that you should go there.
My opinion is that we should not have to read 25 books in order to pass. Because many student had to stay back for that reason. And another reason is that many students don’t get this kind of stuff. One thing you need to do is to try really hard so it could happen.
Have Language classes so we can speak to people, who only speak that curtain language, translate for help and learn new words from the foreigner. We should have language classes so we can learn from them and they can learn our language from us. We should also have this class so we can translate to them if they would need help with their work or homework. Last but not least if we learn some languages from this class we can talk to people that know how to speak it and we can learn new words from each language we learn.
My opinion is that we should not have to read 25 books in order to pass. Because many student had to stay back for that reason. And another reason is that many students don’t get this kind of stuff. One thing you need to do is to try really hard so it could happen.
A variety of different books would be better for our school because students would want to read them, we would pay more attention to the teacher when she is reading, and our reading levels would improve by a lot. Students usually don’t like to read but if our classrooms have many different choices to pick from the students would enjoy reading the books. When the teacher is reading something really interesting we are more likely to listen. Reading levels of students will increase if the books on our level are something we want to read like the latest books. Books have a multiple of things t do with out education and we have to read them.
I have read a lot of different books that have not been interesting but when I found one I like from the library I stuck with it. Books that are about what students like, keep us in tack while raising our reading levels. When the teacher makes you read a book that is so uninteresting you don’t want to read it sometimes it effects students grades. Many choices provide us with the ability to enjoy reading.
Improving schools
The two changes we could make to improve of community for students is having better food because most kids don’t eat this nasty lunch or breakfast because they don’t be putting no salt on it and it tastes nasty and if students just leave home without eating breakfast and they don’t want to eat school breakfast than they wont have the proper nutrients to think or learn. Another thing I think we should improve is how late school starts, I think we should change the school time from 8:30 to 2:30 because if we start the school at 9:00 like usually we’ll have to end at 3:30 and some student have places to go and things to do.
Today I am going to be talking about what can help our school. We also will be talking about how these ideas will be shown to teachers, students, parents and last but administrators and others who are interested. The last thing we will be talking about is how this can help all the students at the LILLA G. FREDERICK PILOT MIDDLE SCHOOL.
Linguistics will really help us because you need to learn to speak proper English, spell properly and use good word choice. It would help us because when we go to 7th and 8th grade and so forth we need to know how to speak proper English. In collage that is the most important thing you need to know what to do. Also words that sounds like something different. Does everyone see how important proper English is to learn?
Linguistics will really help us in our spelling because we need to know how to spell simple like (the, because and how) the reason why is because when we go to collage we need to know how to spell simple like that or you will not pass your collage classes if you don’t know how to spell. Also need to know how to spell because if you don’t know how it is a good chance you will not know how to read.
Linguistics is so important. Now does every one see how important that you need to know how to use proper English. The reason it is so important is because you need to know how the English language is. It is very tricky so it is important. In 6th grade that is very important to learn linguistics.
Today that is what I talked about. It was linguistics we learned about. Hope you enjoyed what I had to say. Also think you for letting me say what we should learn about because it is important to know that.
Jocileny barbosa
Ms Coleman
6b 210
One thing that will help our school is if they make better lunch because the food has no taste there no salt in there food and they food sometimes comes with nasty stuff that they put in there and it taste nasty. I think that if they start doing some good food it will help the student because the food that they are giving us is not good and some student don’t eat it and they come fill sick because they didn’t eat any thing and they don’t get to learn that much stuff so that is why I think that they need to start making netter food but more salt in there food add more cheese to the pizza an they need to put good stuff in the food that student went to eat and that student will want to enjoy.
I think that it will help our school because nobody will get sick and they will have more time to learn and they don’t have to worry about how they food taste and they don’t have to bring food from home and they don’t have to
TO ABLE TO GO ON AIM BECAUSE WE CHAT TO PEOPLE AKS THEM QUESTION ABOUT THE WORK AND BE GOOD SO WE WILL BE ABLE TO GO ON AIM.WHEN WE CHAT WITH OUR CLASSMATE WE WON’T MAKE SOUND AND IF THE TECHER HAS TO ME A INPOTRIN CALL SHE TALK WITHOUT US MAKE LAK BECAUSE WE WILL BE ON AIM A. AND IF A SUDENT WAS NOT HERE THEY CAN AKS THEM WHAT THEY HAVE FOR HOME WORK OR WHATDID THEY LEARN IN A SCHOOL. A ND IF WE COME ON AIM WE WOULD BE HAVE A+ LIKE CRAZY.
TO ABLE TO WEAR WHAT EVER WE WANT BECAUSE WE CAN HAVE THE FREEDO TO WEAR WHAT WE TO NOT THE SCHOOL WE SHOULD PICK WHAT WE WANT NOT WHAT THE SCHOOL AND WE WANT FREEDOM
that the LGF middle school should not wear uniform, because there alot of student that don't like it because it ugly or not comfortable, so i think that we should not wear uniform some students say ohhhhhhh don't go to the LGF because you got to wear uniform go to the CURLY because you don't have to wear uniform so i think that why we should not wear uniform.
Jocileny barbosa
Ms Coleman
6b 210
One thing that will help our school is if they make better lunch because the food has no taste. There no salt and it makes the food taste like candy. I think that if they start making some good food it will help the students because the food that they are giving us is not good. Some student don’t eat and they fill riley sick because they didn’t eat any thing. They don’t get to learn that much stuff so that is why I think that they need to start making better food. They need to put more salt in there food, add more cheese to the pizza, and they need to put good stuff in the food that student went to eat and that student will want to enjoy.
I think that it will help our school because nobody will get sick and they will have more time to learn and they don’t have to worry about how they food taste and they don’t have to bring food from home and they don’t have to call they family to bring them food.
Jocileny barbosa
Ms Coleman
6b 210
One thing that will help our school is if they make better lunch because the food has no taste. There no salt and it makes the food taste like candy. I think that if they start making some good food it will help the students because the food that they are giving us is not good. Some student don’t eat and they fill really sick because they didn’t eat any thing. They don’t get to learn that much stuff so that is why I think that they need to start making better food. They need to put more salt in there food, add more cheese to the pizza, and they need to put good stuff in the food that student went to eat and that student will want to enjoy.
I think that it will help our school because nobody will get sick and they will have more time to learn and they don’t have to worry about how they food taste and they don’t have to bring food from home and they don’t have to call they family to bring them food.
Language classes are important because you can learn new words in different languages, translate for help, and teach each other different words from each other's language. We should have language classes so we can learn from them and they can learn our language from us. We should also have this class so we can translate to them if they would need help with their work or homework. Last but not least if we learn some languages from this class we can talk to people that know how to speak it and we can learn new words from each language we learn.
UNIFORMS are awful because we have to wear them everyday, we have to wear the same clothes everyday, and we look all the same at school. Uniforms are hideous. Some students don’t pay attention to their work they pay attention to how they look because their worried about what they are wearing. But if they we get to choose their outfits we wouldn’t be worried about what were wearing because we choose to wear that we wasn’t forced to wear that.
My suggestion will improve the school because we would stop worrying about how we look in the uniforms but we will start to pay more attention in class. We will get better grades because we wont have to go to the bathrooms to look at how we look. We would also learn important. And we will all be happy because we wont be forced to wear uniforms. Some students don’t pay attention to their work because they pay attention to how they look because their worried about what they are wearing. But if we get to choose our outfits we wouldn’t be worried about what were wearing because we choose to wear this and we wasn’t forced to wear this.
Improving schools
There are a couple changes I would like to make to our school, changes we could make to improve of community for students is having better food because most kids don’t eat this nasty lunch or breakfast because they don’t put any salt on it, it tastes nasty, and sometimes kids get there late and don’t get any breakfast. If students just leave home without eating breakfast and they don’t want to eat school breakfast than they wont have the proper nutrients to think or learn. Another thing I think we should improve is how late school starts, I think we should change the school time from 8:30 to 2:30 because if we start the school at 9:00 like usually we’ll have to end at 3:30 and some student have places to go and things to do. Some kids also are probably used to going to school early or later than the LGF starts. And finally I think our school should be changed to a school who doesn’t wear uniforms because some students aren’t used to wearing uniform, It feels uncomfortable, or they just don’t like it because it’s ugly.
UNIFORMS are awful because we have to wear them everyday, we have to wear the same clothes, and we look all the same at school. Uniforms are hideous. Some students don’t pay attention to their work they pay attention to how they look because their worried about what they are wearing. But if they we get to choose their outfits we wouldn’t be worried about what were wearing because we choose to wear that we wasn’t forced to wear that.
My suggestion will improve the school because we would stop worrying about how we look in the uniforms but we will start to pay more attention in class. We will get better grades because we wont have to go to the bathrooms to look at how we look. We would also learn important. And we will all be happy because we wont be forced to wear uniforms. Some students don’t pay attention to their work because they pay attention to how they look because their worried about what they are wearing. But if we get to choose our outfits we wouldn’t be worried about what were wearing because we choose to wear this and we wasn’t forced to wear this.
Linguistics will really help us because you need to learn to speak proper English, spell properly and use good word choice. It would help us because when we go to 7th and 8th grade and so forth we need to know how to speak proper English. In collage that is the most important thing you need to know what to do. Also words that sounds like something different. Does everyone see how important proper English is to learn?
Linguistics will really help us in our spelling because we need to know how to spell simple like (the, because and how) the reason why is because when we go to collage we need to know how to spell simple like that or you will not pass your collage classes if you don’t know how to spell. Also need to know how to spell because if you don’t know how it is a good chance you will not know how to read.
Linguistics is so important. Now does every one see how important that you need to know how to use proper English. The reason it is so important is because you need to know how the English language is. It is very tricky so it is important. In 6th grade that is very important to learn linguistics.
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Isaiah Martinez
Ms. Coleman
6B 210
January 12, 2010 Better food chouses will help us learn better because it could help students pay more attention in school stay awake if they ever fall asleep in class, and it will improve the way they think about things. Because the lunch that we have her at the lgf slows us down or makes us tired. We, the students really don’t like lunch. If schools would serve better lunch and breakfast . I think that students probably don’t learn as much as they need to because maybe they don’t have as much energy as their body needs, because of the fact that breakfast in needed in our bodies and without breakfast we will not have no energy to learn.
People think teachers should give students more time to work on assignments, homework, and projects. Students need time to work on things they haven’t finished doing. Most people think that teachers give students less time to work on things. Teachers should give students more time to finish or work on things they haven’t done. Students also think that they need more time to work on schoolwork and homework.
School lunches are disgusting, nasty, and disturbing because sometimes they give us food that we don’t know about. But Better lunches will be better then the surfeit lunches. It will be a miracle if my school had better lunches. But some students like the disgusting lunches. Better lunches will clear my appetite and the students of the Lila g. Fredrick middle school.
A change I think would make our school better is, we can sort of make a cool lounge to relax in and have fun and do you work. Make the lounge just like home. So what I was thinking of is making the lounge in the middle of the hallway, make a relaxing community room like in the center of the academy were the big white board is. We could add things like snacks, games, and in side a movie area. Lets make middle school fun. And I have came up with this idea because for kids who can’t concentrate on there work because they are so board. So then if we have this they wont be, because their relaxing and they are getting all of their work done. But that is only if the teachers suggests that the boy/girl can go there.
Isaiah Martinez
Ms. Coleman
6B 210
January 12, 2010 Better food chouses will help us learn better because it could help students pay more attention in school stay awake if they ever fall asleep in class, and it will improve the way they think about things. Because the lunch that we have her at the lgf slows us down or makes us tired. We, the students really don’t like lunch. If schools would serve better lunch and breakfast because of the fact that breakfast is needed in our bodies and without breakfast we will not have no energy to learn. Students probably don’t eat breakfast because they are not interested in the breakfast that is given to them. I also think that every BPS should serve better lunches. Another thing I think will help students learn if they sell their snacks at a cheaper price.
Schools should do more fun things with the students because we can learn the values and importance of partnership, you can have more fun and excitement in learning and to keep students from getting into trouble and kids might even want to come to school more often. And these things will also make kids stop doing drugs, it will also want to make kids stop skipping school and care more about their education so maybe some day you can become something in life.
Schools should also add a lounge because it would help kids relax, it will also help kids come down when they are angry and the lounge would let kids excited to come to school. And this lounge would be a excellent and new way for kids to calm down and follow directions more often.
The one thing that would make the school better is to not truing gum in class when the teacher is talking and to have free time. If the children stop truing gum school will go faster by learning and it will be easer if they stop talking in line. Ever children in the school billing want free time so am I. if we get free time I thing the children would be a better learner, reader, and writer. I am not saying this because I thing this school is poor it just that the children in this school need to stop truing gum. If I were the principal I would put cream ever where in the school billing. I would put it in the classes and in the.
Naiomy
My opinion for a rule to change is that school charging kids for school lunch
Because it’s Annoying, Rude, and wrong. I say that because why will anybody charge a kid for food even though they need it to raise money for the school. It doe not matter they can charge kids for something else they can make a book fair or something else that helps ear money they can even make hat day or something to earn money instead of charging money for food. Especially if they are going to be in a place for hours trying to get there education then on top of that you are going to charge them for food I just think that it is wrong and that that rule should change for the kids that have to pay lunch. Also because if they don’t have the money to pay lunch they have to stay the whole day without eating and that is just not right to leave someone watching while other people are eating.
My idea is to change the lunch ladies they are mean ,nasty and horrible chefs . They are mean to the students when we do something wrong like drop your food by accident . Lunch ladies are nasty because I always find something weird in my food like I was about to eat my breakfast I found a hair . Sometime they are horrible chefs because their food are always tasteless and disgusting. Local school committee should change our
lunch ladies with the best lunch ladies in the world. Our student wouldn’t be staving in class or gym.
The change that I want to make for the LGF is to get better lunch, because when we get to class we will have good energy, it will help us pay a lot of attention in class, we wont be lazy to do work in class,
Because when our class is ready to go down stair’s we are like 10 or 15 min late.
So we get like the left over. So when we go down stairs, we sometimes just get the left over. And the students in my class don’t like it, so that why I think that we need to have better lunch. So when we come up stairs we will have a good full tummy. And ready to go back to A2 and get some more work done.
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