Wednesday, December 2, 2009

Perfect day

In a 5-paragraph essay, describe your perfect day.

21 comments:

Gabrielle said...

My idea of the perfect day is a day where I can just relax and not have to worry, it also means that there is no work to be done, and it means no ones bothering me about anything. That would be the day, but sometimes I’m scared it’ll never happen, because there’s no such thing as the perfect day.
If it was a perfect day I would be so relaxed and calm that nothing could worry me. That would be the day when pigs fly, because there’s never… EVER a day that I am simply relaxed. There’s always something that needs to be done, and I’m always the one who has to do it. I really wish there could be a perfect day for me.
Another idea of a perfect day is there is no work to be done and I can just be I peace and quiet all day. That is another reason why a perfect day for me isn’t possible, because I am never in complete peace and quiet at school or home. Now I really don’t mind going to school and having a perfect day I mean school is fun, but I still would never be in absolute peace and quiet.
The last way I would have a perfect day was if no on bothered me with anything. That also could never happen, as a big and little sister I have a lot of responsibility and that doesn’t stop on Fridays. When the weekends come here come the chores and the cheap allowance. Now I know what you’re thinking how can allowance be cheap? TRUST ME IT CAN!
It is actually kind of depressing knowing that I can never have a day like that, but I have had some pretty good days before. I don’t think anyone can have a perfect day, because at least one thing has to go wrong.

Weslin guerrero said...

I am going to describe to you 3 days that are perfect for me. For me a perfect day is when I have fun and nobody stopping me.

One perfect day is on a summer one. I can go to the beach and get all the food I want for free. Also after I leave the beach I can go to the movie theater. I would see 5 movies and get all the popcorn, candy, and drinks I want. Then after the movies are done it would be like 8:00 and I can go home to get ready for my friends party. That is one perfect day.

A second perfect day would be on a winter day. I would go to Dunkin Donuts with my friends, so we can drink some hot coco. Then after I would go to my moms house to go and help her decorate for Christmas day. Next I would help my dad clean the snow off his car so he can take me and my cousins to a mountain, so we can go down the mountains on our sleds. That is a second perfect day.

The last perfect day would be on a spring day. I would go with my class to a farm to pick fruits and veggies. Then when I left school the teachers didn’t give homework. Next I would go to my grandma’s house to get ready to take professional spring pictures. I would stand in a circle with spring backgrounds behind me and the would take the picture. That would be a perfect day.

I am done describing to you my 3 perfect days.

Gabrielle said...

My idea of the perfect day is a day where I can just relax and not have to worry, it also means that there is no work to be done, and it means no ones bothering me about anything. That would be the day, but sometimes I’m scared it’ll never happen, because there’s no such thing as the perfect day.
If it was a perfect day I would be so relaxed and calm that nothing could worry me. That would be the day when pigs fly, because there’s never… EVER a day that I am simply relaxed. There’s always something that needs to be done, and I’m always the one who has to do it. I really wish there could be a perfect day for me.
Another idea of a perfect day is there is no work to be done and I can just be I peace and quiet all day. That is another reason why a perfect day for me isn’t possible, because I am never in complete peace and quiet at school or home. Now I really don’t mind going to school and having a perfect day I mean school is fun, but I still would never be in absolute peace and quiet.
The last way I would have a perfect day was if no on bothered me with anything. That also could never happen, as a big and little sister I have a lot of responsibility and that doesn’t stop on Fridays. When the weekends come here come the chores and the cheap allowance. Now I know what you’re thinking how can allowance be cheap? TRUST ME IT CAN!
It is actually kind of depressing knowing that I can never have a day like that, but I have had some pretty good days before. I don’t think anyone can have a perfect day, because at least one thing has to go wrong.

Malachi Hernandez said...

Malachi Hernandez


My perfect day… In my perfect day I wake up so early because the sun is extremely bright that it shines in my face. I go to brush my teeth then right when I leave the bathroom my big brother scares me. My heart had jumped but I didn’t. Then after I am done eating my favorite cereal Fruity Pebbles he asks me “Malachi do you want to come with me to walk the dog”? I reply sure why not. We walk all the way to Clifford Park. And by that time I still had a whole bunch of energy.

Then out of nowhere he runs away. I ask him where are you going with the dog? He replied, “To run around the baseball field”. I said to myself WOAH!!! I scream to him it is about a mile long how can you run one entire mile. Then I look back and see my mom coming back from work. I ask her where are you going, and she said, “Home, and when you get home get dressed”.

I go home and get dressed. We go all the way to Chelsea. I’m thinking to myself where are we going. And we pull up into Expressions. I think o yea baby shoes. We walk into Expressions and she says, “What shoes do you want”? I say Jordan’s-Hall of Fames. She said “Iight”. So I get the shoes and I am extremely excited. I scream to her THANK YOU!!! She said “no problem”.

After that I go home and play my video game Call of Duty. It was extremely fun; I had beaten my big brother nine times in a row. But then the next turn I lost. After that I was so hungry. So we had ordered Chinese food. It was the bomb. And by 7:00 pm it was already pitch black. So I decided to go to bed. I went to bed and I feel asleep like a baby. I was so comfortable and I wish it could happen every day.

Hopefully it really does happen. Maybe it will maybe it won’t who knows. As long as I get my Chinese food I’m good. That’s my perfect day now lets hear yours.

Brenda said...

Hey it’s me Brenda and I will tell you in a 5-paragraph essay telling you about my perfect day. It will show you what I like to make a day perfect. You will learn about 3 special things that will make my day perfect. So let’s get on with it. So now paragraph 2.

The first thing to make my day perfect would be “NO SCHOOL!” because I would get time to spend with my family. If their where no school I can have some fun with my family and friends. It’s like a mini vacation. That is one thing that would make my day perfect. Let’s get further more into this essay.

The second thing or special part would be shopping. Shopping is one of my hobbies and I would like to buy something for my teachers and my friends at the mall. That would be a great gift for them. It shows me in an inspired way. So that is my 2nd part of my perfect day.

The last thing to make my day perfect would be going to the movie theater. I would very much like to see that new movie coming out to the movie theater. I want to eat some popcorn and have an awsome time. Watching a comedy film. That is my last thing to make my day perfect.

Those are my 3 special parts to make a full perfect day for me. So if this were real (a day of from school) I would totally do this. It brings me joy to do what is on my perfect day list. So this was my essay on my perfect day. See you next time on the 6th grade blog.

Lucinda Vieira said...

Perfect day
I will be writing about my perfect day and how it got even more perfect by the minute!
My perfect day was when anybody didn’t bother me. It was also the day that I had the most fun. I didn’t get yelled at. All I heard was people screaming happily as they have fun. It was the day I went to Canon B. Lake.
It was a hot warm day and my brother and sister was playing. I rode happily on all the rides and as I was burning hot I could feel the cold water from the Boston tea party ride. As the wind blew my hair this is the best day ever. I was so happy there was a sunny weather and the sun melted all the ice creams it could possibly melt.
I sat and took a shade under the nice cool tree. And then I had got to take a picture with my whole family. I waited with excitement for my other cousins to get there and so we could ride my most favorite ride of all Cannon B. Lake, the roller coaster! When my cousins got there the park was even louder than before. Then it was lunchtime I was to egger to eat any thing not even my favorite meal! That was really the best day ever for me. I even got my favorite meal how cool is that I was surprised and its not even my birth day.
I hope you’ve read the story of my perfect day and enjoyed it thank you for reading!

Lucinda Vieira said...

Perfect day
I will be writing about my perfect day and how it got even more perfect by the minute!
My perfect day was when anybody didn’t bother me. It was also the day that I had the most fun. I didn’t get yelled at. All I heard was people screaming happily as they have fun. It was the day I went to Canon B. Lake.
It was a hot warm day and my brother and sister was playing. I rode happily on all the rides and as I was burning hot I could feel the cold water from the Boston tea party ride. As the wind blew my hair this is the best day ever. I was so happy there was a sunny weather and the sun melted all the ice creams it could possibly melt.
I sat and took a shade under the nice cool tree. And then I had got to take a picture with my whole family. I waited with excitement for my other cousins to get there and so we could ride my most favorite ride of all Cannon B. Lake, the roller coaster! When my cousins got there the park was even louder than before. Then it was lunchtime I was to egger to eat any thing not even my favorite meal! That was really the best day ever for me. I even got my favorite meal how cool is that I was surprised and its not even my birth day.
I hope you’ve read the story of my perfect day and enjoyed it thank you for reading!

jean done said...

I am going to write about my perfect day. That was a year ago when I received the most valuable player award. Also the ways that I got it and how much it took me.

First it was a big step for me because they took me a lot of injuries. And they were that one time I hit the fence trying to catch a baseball. As well they took me to a cast in my knee but I took it off because I couldn’t stand it. There for they gave me the most valuable player award.

Secondly they gave me the most valuable player award. Because it took me attitude and courage. And that attitude let me to it. Because I stepped to the plate and it was to hit the ball. And when I played first base I had to split like no other times. Because when you play first base you have to split in a short ball.

To conclude they gave the most valuable player award to me because. I have grate attitude with players in my league. I have never faught any body that comes up to me and played the game like I supposed to.



In conclusion I wrote about it because it was the perfect day when I received the award. With honors and I thank for them. And for all it took me to get it and thanks.

jean done said...

I am going to write about my perfect day. That was a year ago when I received the most valuable player award. Also the ways that I got it and how much it took me.

First it was a big step for me because they took me a lot of injuries. And they were that one time I hit the fence trying to catch a baseball. As well they took me to a cast in my knee but I took it off because I couldn’t stand it. There for they gave me the most valuable player award.

Secondly they gave me the most valuable player award. Because it took me attitude and courage. And that attitude let me to it. Because I stepped to the plate and it was to hit the ball. And when I played first base I had to split like no other times. Because when you play first base you have to split in a short ball.

To conclude they gave the most valuable player award to me because. I have grate attitude with players in my league. I have never faught any body that comes up to me and played the game like I supposed to.



In conclusion I wrote about it because it was the perfect day when I received the award. With honors and I thank for them. And for all it took me to get it and thanks.

Soyini W. said...

I am writing a 5 paragraph essay about my perfect day. I need include what I will do and how will I feel. But also I need to include details and information. This will be my perfect day in the mall or teaching a class and probably at a huge party with famous singers. I will give you information about what I am doing and why.

My perfect day will be shopping with $5,000,000. I will be happy because I am shopping with a lot of money. I’ll buy new Jordan’s, with some jeans. Also, 50 different types of shirts. My friends and I won’t have to go to school, so we could just at the mall and shop till we drop. That is one of my perfect days.

My second perfect day will be at school and my teacher calls on me and says I can be the Teacher forever. That day would be great. I could keep kids for lunch, if I wanted to. Also I could be a great teacher but not be mean. So my day would go great for an 11 year old to teacher other 11-13 year old kids. That would be my perfect day too.

My last perfect day would be me hanging out famous singers. We will have fun in a big mansion. I’ll have a big smile on my face. People will be singing and I will dancing in the background. Also we will then shop. That is last perfect day.

These are all my perfect days. All my perfect days will some day come. I can see my self in all my perfect days. I know at least one of perfect days will come to me. I can’t wait until my perfect day comes.

Jailene Garcia said...

Jailene My perfect day
I’m going to write about my perfect day and how I would like to send it.In my perfect I would like to wake up very
Late and that no one would bother me .I would like to wake up and take my sweet time and I wouldn’t be rushed and after
My very long shower I would like to get dressed and go to the kicken and find my breakfast already done for me and it would be ready to be severed. Than when I would be done with that I would like to a diver to take me to the mall and everywhere I say so.

In my perfect day I would like at least 20000 dollars to send in the mall all for me and that no one would ask me to give them money.
I would like for a person to be next o me or very where I go so that they can carry my things everywhere I go. In my perfect when I would be done with my shopping I would like so hat the diver would take me out to eat but not somewhere that that the things I get and I cheap I would get them free.

In my perfect day I would like to go to the salon to do my hair and my nails and very thing I wanted. I would also would like to go to the beach and stay there as long as and when I would be done with that I would like to go to my house and get dressed so that I would be ready to got out. After I would be done with my shower I would like my diver to take me to a casino and send as much money as I wanted to.

In my perfect day I would like to go to the movies with my friends and Lett them pay for me so that I wouldn’t have to send my money when they could just pay for me. After o would be done with the movie I would like to for my diver so that take me home and to get my things all packed so when I would be done getting ready he can take my things put them in he car and take me to the airport so that iwould go to D.R and send all my time there.

These are all the things that would make my perfect day. I would like to go shopping, to a casino, to the movies and I would like to get my hair done and nails and after I would be done with all that my diver could go pack my cloths so that when im ready we could go tot the airport and I would catch my plan to D.R

Nakia said...

Hey! This five paragraph essay is about my favorite day. It will tell everything that happen on Saturday. So read on and see how perfect my day is.
On reason why this is my perfect day because. on Saturday morning I had just got out of bed. Then I could smell a fresh maple smell. I knew from that minute that my mother was cooking breakfast. So I slipped o my slippers and throw on my bathrobe and went down stairs. I saw bacon, eggs, grits, orange juice, milk, waffles, pancakes all over the table. I grabbed a plate and a fork and ate. I went up stairs again to take a shower and get dressed. Before that my mom told me I had a surprise.
The second reason is I got to go to the park. I was playing tag. I got to be it ONLY once. I was really excited. I was still wondering what my mother was getting me. That’s why she told my grandmother t take me to the park. My brother and I were play with our friends Grace and Grapey. We love to play in the sand box. We made sandcastles and sand stars. I even found ten sand dollar. It was like a day at the beach. We played in the sand just without the water. But it was still exciting.
The last reason why this is my perfect day is I final got to find out what was the surprise. I found out because my mom called my grandmother and told her to bring us home. But we got to stay for one more hour. Then my grandmother called to us and said,” time to go home lets go.” So we got our stuff said go bye to our friends and left. We were walking home and I realized my grandmother was really excited. When we got home I saw the truck out front. I felt the front of the truck and it was warm. So I started to run up the stairs. Everyone was behind me. I opened the door and went to my mom and dads. I looked in the room and I found 2 baby beagle. I found an boy beagle and a girl beagle. I got the girl and my sister got the boy. I named my new puppy lady and my sister Ashley named her puppy prince. That’s was my perfect day.
Hey. Did you like it? Did you finger out what is my perfect day? Well if you didn’t my perfect day was getting my first dog. Well I hope you like my five paragraph essay on my perfect

Jailene Garcia said...

My perfect day
I’m going to write about my perfect day and how I would like to send it.In my perfect I would like to wake up very
Late and that no one would bother me .I would like to wake up and take my sweet time and I wouldn’t be rushed and after
My very long shower I would like to get dressed and go to the kicken and find my breakfast already done for me and it would be ready to be severed. Than when I would be done with that I would like to a diver to take me to the mall and everywhere I say so.

In my perfect day I would like at least 20000 dollars to send in the mall all for me and that no one would ask me to give them money.
I would like for a person to be next o me or very where I go so that they can carry my things everywhere I go. In my perfect when I would be done with my shopping I would like so hat the diver would take me out to eat but not somewhere that that the things I get and I cheap I would get them free.

In my perfect day I would like to go to the salon to do my hair and my nails and very thing I wanted. I would also would like to go to the beach and stay there as long as and when I would be done with that I would like to go to my house and get dressed so that I would be ready to got out. After I would be done with my shower I would like my diver to take me to a casino and send as much money as I wanted to.

In my perfect day I would like to go to the movies with my friends and Lett them pay for me so that I wouldn’t have to send my money when they could just pay for me. After o would be done with the movie I would like to for my diver so that take me home and to get my things all packed so when I would be done getting ready he can take my things put them in he car and take me to the airport so that iwould go to D.R and send all my time there.

These are all the things that would make my perfect day. I would like to go shopping, to a casino, to the movies and I would like to get my hair done and nails and after I would be done with all that my diver could go pack my cloths so that when im ready we could go tot the airport and I would catch my plan to D.R

sequoia grubbs said...

Sequoia Grubbs
I am going to describe to how my perfect day would be. I would have so much fun and enjoy myself I hope you like it.
My perfect day. On my perfect day I am going to go swimming at the beach. The beach were going to go to is nantascket beach my favorite beach. I am going to have the prettiest bathing suit and have fun in the water. My family is going to be with me and going to get food and my favorite thing is going to the Mary –go- round. Were going to eat ice cream and have fried doe. This is the first thing were going to do.
This second thing were going to do is on my perfect. Were going to go shopping in the Galaria mall and by things for all of us. The thing I am going to buy is shoes clothes and things that I like. While were I the mall were going to go to the arcade there and play on the fun games. What were also going to do is go on the boat ride that is front of the mall and sail on the water. This what were going to do in the mall.
Other thing were going to do on my perfect day is go to six flags in new Hampshire with my family. What were going to do at six flags is go on the rides on my favorites the mind eraser. Then were going to go on some rides that my family likes. Were also going to eat some food there and just hang out and have fun. Then before were going to go see the parade and last go on the bizarro coaster then the superman and batman rollercoaster.
The last thing were going to do on my perfect day is hang out with my family after all the things we done. Were just going to sit back and relax watch TV and do whatever we can do. Were going to do this so we can just take of all the thing we done and enjoy the rest of the day. This is what were going to on my perfect day.
I hope you enjoyed what I am going to do on my perfect day. And these are all the things were going to do on my perfect day.

tabrina st.Cyere said...

Tabrina St.Cyere 12/2/09


If I were to have a perfect day I not shore how I will spend it. I would want to do something that I would never be able to do on any other day. But on a perfect day I would love to just be with what I know and love instead of trying new things. A perfect day would be a lot of things for me.
For something I have never tried before perfect day I would go to an amusement park and ride colossal rollercoaster or something. Probity try some food that I have never even thought of eating before. Then I would just run around the park with my friends and stay until it gets dark. That would be a trying something new day.
Trying something new is fun but sometimes having an ordinary day can be the perfect day for me. For a day like that I would visit the street that I used to live on in Framingham. It would be very unexciting but it would be nice to me because I miss the summer time when could just go outside and chill.
A perfect day can be a lot to me but a perfect day that that would be both is going to the movies with my friends in Framingham. It’s new yet old because new because it’s a movie but old friends.
By writing this essay I realized that a perfect day can be many, very different things people. At least to me.

Anonymous said...

My Perfect Day
Nashaly Seguino

My perfect day will be a day all to myself. I will have a great breakfast. Then get ready and go to the pool and have it all to myself. After I will relax at home sleeping with no disturbance. That will make my day perfect.
The first thing I will do to have a great day is have a great breakfast. I will eat a warm chocolate muffin, scrambled eggs and bacon. For a drink I will have Hot Chocolate. While I’m eat I will be next to my fire place. After I will see I’m done and pleased at my breakfast.
The second thing I will do is take a hot shower. When I’m done I will get my towel, bathing suit, and my tanning chair along with my tanning oil and head to the pool. At the pool I will start of tanning. When I’m done tanning I will jump into warm pool with no one there and lay in the sun tanning. When I’m completely done I will go home take a shower and do the next thing to finish up my day.
Last but not least when I’m finished taken a shower , I will get in my silky pajamas. Then I will go turn on my fire place. When it is on I will lie next to it. Then while I’m lying there I will close my eyes and try to sleep. After I will put on natural music and doze of on my comfortable bed.
That will be my perfect day. The first thing to do is at a breakfast that lasted the entire day. Then in the afternoon go to the pool with no one there. Last but not least I will doze of wishing for the same thing the next day. That will be my perfect day.

Anonymous said...

My Perfect Day
Nashaly Seguino

My perfect day will be a day all to myself. I will have a great breakfast. Then get ready and go to the pool and have it all to myself. After I will relax at home sleeping with no disturbance. That will make my day perfect.
The first thing I will do to have a great day is have a great breakfast. I will eat a warm chocolate muffin, scrambled eggs and bacon. For a drink I will have Hot Chocolate. While I’m eat I will be next to my fire place. After I will see I’m done and pleased at my breakfast.
The second thing I will do is take a hot shower. When I’m done I will get my towel, bathing suit, and my tanning chair along with my tanning oil and head to the pool. At the pool I will start of tanning. When I’m done tanning I will jump into warm pool with no one there and lay in the sun tanning. When I’m completely done I will go home take a shower and do the next thing to finish up my day.
Last but not least when I’m finished taken a shower , I will get in my silky pajamas. Then I will go turn on my fire place. When it is on I will lie next to it. Then while I’m lying there I will close my eyes and try to sleep. After I will put on natural music and doze of on my comfortable bed.
That will be my perfect day. The first thing to do is at a breakfast that lasted the entire day. Then in the afternoon go to the pool with no one there. Last but not least I will doze of wishing for the same thing the next day. That will be my perfect day.

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Benny said...

I would like to sum MY perfect day with this video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FGi2XwzLHHg

Anonymous said...

Well my best day ever would be a school day . Also all the teachers ( in what ever grade) would get together and by pizza . After we eat pizza we could go to any class to see/talk/hang out with friends. Then out of know where I am in a room alone and see my crush and his friend playing connect 4 . After I sit next to my crush and start playing . Then when his friend gets board he walks away leaving me and my crush alone

Anonymous said...

Wow mine toooooo!!!!